Today I had a third grade class write some poetry. After many discussions, they were not left with much time to write their poems, but as you can see below, they rose to the challenge. In addition to thinking about poetry forms, we worked in a little talk about pseudonyms and Internet safety as we thought about the dangers of putting your full name out for the world to see. You will note some pretty creative pseudonyms here. We also talked about copyright. Each student signed a release allowing me to put their poetry on this blog. There will be more poems coming soon from other students as well as concrete poems that will require my scanner to be fully operative.
And now, some poems.
The Bat by "blah, blah, blah"
The bat that wanted
A cat
Was eating
I think,
Ah Yes,
A rat.
The rat was big, he thought
So he sold the rat
And got a cat.
The cat wanted to eat
A Kit Kat
So the bat gave
A Kit Kat
To the cat.
And the bat
Ate another rat.
Lizard by Omar
Lumpy
Icky
Zigzag
Awkward
Ridiculous
Disturbing
Cat by Benyo-man
Cats
Always are
Trouble
Owls by A. W.
Owls
With
Lovely
Spells
Rat by P.G.
Ridiculous
Awkward
Tomato
Cat by Michael H.
A big cat
Ate
The fat rat.
Witch by Jessica
Witches fly on
Gnarled wood
Smoke in the air.
Pumpkin by Elie
Plump
Unicorns fly through the mushy pumpkin pie.
Mommy carves jack-o-lanterns.
Pumpkin pies don't like unicorns.
Kenny is fat because he eats pumpkins raw.
I like Halloween.
Nice Halloween Pumpkins.
Pumpkin by Emma
Plump
Unique
Mushy
Pumpkin pie
Kind of squishy
Insides are gooey
Nice orange pumpkins.
Halloween's Night by Madeleine
At Halloween's night
We go to trick-or-treating.
When dark falls
Witches with their cats
Come out. When all is dark
And midnight strokes
Witches gather together
And tell stories.
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this is great poetry :) xx
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